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Weighed
Average (?): (6.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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good story to reach but no shock value nothing that real reaches out and grabs your attention (7/10)
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Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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Nicely written seduction scene, but very little B, D, S or M; but I see that Chastity has further adventures. Perhaps there will be more tension in some of the later episodes. IMO a fairly long essentially two-person story like this could use a little more characterization. We don't learn much about either of the principals save for the fact that Chastity is an awfully naive high school senior. But again, perhaps that will be remedied in later chapters. The author has a pleasingly fluent style but the story could use a bit more oomph. (7/10)
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