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Top of the Naughty List
Author: ninja5
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(Added on Jul 29, 2012)
(This month 14767 readers) (Total 23384 readers) |
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A young woman finds out just what it means to be No.1 on Santa's naughty list. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 5, 2012 |
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Not a bad story, but not erotic. What pushed it from '7' to '6' was what 'put her over the top': Her ex-boyfriend was a loser and killed himself. She was a bad person, but she wasn't responsible for that. If he'd been a worthwhile person himself, he would've dumped her and not looked back. If she'd really been 'the worst of the lot' (which seems like it should've been the title), she'd've killed him. His committing suicide is on him, and she bears no responsibility.
As someone who has attempted suicide myself (obviously unsuccessfully), he had no one to blame other than himself. He picked the wrong girl, then stuck with her beyond all reason, then finished by trying (should've been unsuccessfully, but Santa made a mistake) to make her responsible for his unhappiness. At least the boyfriend deserved to die. (6/10)
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