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The BBQ
Author: JAR
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(Added on Jul 22, 2012)
(This month 74534 readers) (Total 88594 readers) |
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Girl get invite to a BBQ but is in for a big surprise |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
traumaemt
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Nov 8, 2015 |
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I would have liked to see what happened with the last 4 people who had to take a bite of brain, and when she was actually killed. But overall, this was a great snuff story! Keep up the good work! (9/10)
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Major Littmann
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Jul 29, 2012 |
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Sickeningly good, it sent me rushing to the bathroom (to throw up) Oh my God!
It would have been a 10 but Tea as in a cup of Tea is TEA, a Golf Tee is TEE (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
karen1982
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Jul 25, 2012 |
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My apologies but the character is supposed to be a woman yet has an Adam's apple. This story needs to be edited. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
traumaemt
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2015)
- karen1982, all humans have an adams apple. It is the thyroid and the top of the trachea. It is just more prominent in males than females.
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