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Between The Trees
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Jul 21, 2012)
(This month 19562 readers) (Total 31667 readers) |
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A man decides to take a very special vacation involving a woman, a whip, and his personal fantasies. NOTE: The story starts with a strong horror tone, and comes with a surprise ending. If horror is not your thing, I hope you'll skip the gory parts and focus on the storyline. Then, once you know the characters, you'll come back and read the story in its entirety. I think you'll be pleased. |
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| Reviewer:
Stephen Miletus
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Aug 20, 2012 |
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I don't know why, but I was reminded of Kawabata Yasunari in how you described the first scene of the two of them together; perhaps it was the pacing, or how the scene unfolded. Very well written, almost a twist in how the story ends. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Aug 20, 2012)
- I had to look up Kawabata Yasunari as I wasn't familiar with his work. High praise indeed! Thank you for the compliment! As I mentioned before, I was experimenting with a slightly different style than my other work and I wasn't sure how it would be received, so I'm glad it is receiving such positive reviews.
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 9, 2012 |
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Wonderfully done! Could use a bit more description - both physical and emotional - rather than just action, but a really enjoyable read. I hope to see more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2012)
- Thank you! I tried a different style this time to see how it would work - more action oriented and less description. The ending is open enough that I can write a sequel if there's interest in these two characters, or I can use a different customer and a different girl in Alexi/Sergei's stable. I'm disappointed in the file conversion that seemed to remove my quotations and other punctuation, but oh well.
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