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Linda finds a friend
Author: The Bitchfinder General
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(Added on Jul 9, 2012)
(This month 60091 readers) (Total 71052 readers) |
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Linda Marshall, a new student at a private girls' school, is bullied by the other kids and the headmistress Miss Taylor. This is the story of how she makes her first friend at school! |
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jul 9, 2012 |
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7000 characters dosn't have to be too short but here it was arguaby too long, this tid bit should have been edited out of the finalised story, maybe the spanking could have been expanded, who knows but the long boring speeches remind me of Shakespeares worst attempts and as I said it lacks any real quality. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jul 9, 2012 |
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Come on, please. 7,000 characters does not a story make. There's no depth, no sense of character and this needs a lot more work. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Jul 9, 2012)
- Agreed but is it worth the effort?
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