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katie's punishment
Author: Maso Mark
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(Added on Jul 4, 2012)
(This month 33893 readers) (Total 56929 readers) |
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little fuck slut steals some shit from my apartment, now its time for her punishment |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Jul 21, 2012 |
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No substance, where is part 1? (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Jul 8, 2012 |
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Actually, I can see Lisa's point. The story -- or part of which -- is quite short and run-of-the-mill.
That the first part is missing, though, is perhaps just an upload issue. It should not happen, but it always can. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jul 7, 2012 |
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Why only five stars? Well, I'd ask why only 6,000 characters - the minimum is supposed to be 10,000. And where's part 1?
Come on, this is half finished. Maybe there was some technical glitch, in which case I hope it's sorted out soonest. When there's more to go on then the rating may well change. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2012)
- Somewhat harsh my dear Lisa.
- Replied by:
Lisa Jones
(Edit) (Jul 8, 2012)
- Five stars is 'OK, but has some promise. The author could improve it' which, to my mind, exactly describes what we have here.
Once there is a story to judge then I can judge it properly - and it may well earn more stars.
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jul 6, 2012 |
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It seems strange to start on part 2 and paragraaphs etc would have been nice and it was somewhat short but it was very good! (9/10)
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