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Rhode Rage
Author: James X Pendergrass
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(Added on Apr 28, 2012)
(This month 122289 readers) (Total 161062 readers) |
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Roger is a young man full is piss and vinegar. He doesn't have much respect for anyone else, especially women. One day he has a traffic incident and he gives an older woman the middle finger. Soon, Roger discovers he has insulted Vanessa Cromwell, the owner of the country club where Roger works. With the help of her female supremacist friend and other female employees, Vanessa decides to teach Roger an extremely humiliating lesson. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Jul 24, 2012 |
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Good story of humiliation and female
domination, please proofread. I don't
understand why authors do not take time
to make edits to their work, it seems
to be very common. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- Thanks for the review. I'm a bit puzzled by your comment since I do proofread my writing. This story was edited numerous times. If there are specific errors, please take the time to point them at to me at jmplays@yahoo.com. I do appreciate it. It is always a challenge without professional editing help. -James www.jamespendergrass.com
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jul 16, 2012 |
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7/16/12: The first three chapters were very enjoyable and my rating of an 8 has a great possibility of increasing. I would like to see where the story is going first, but I have high hopes this story will just get better. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- Thanks. I will post the entire story in the next couple of months. You can find much more of my work at this website under "James P." That was my old moniker. -James
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| Reviewer:
loki325
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May 6, 2012 |
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Great please post more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Sep 18, 2012)
- Thanks. There is more coming!
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