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Friends With Benefits
Author: subkitty
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(Added on May 18, 2002)
(This month 9552 readers) (Total 20087 readers) |
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I met him and wanted him immediately. But, I never imagined that I would reveal to him my submissive nature. This chapter is only the beginning of a very long twisted adventure. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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May 12, 2005 |
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Pretty good story. I like the character development of the guy w/the attitude so far. The wife's dialogue seemed a little too anxious, took away some of the anticipation. I did like the ending, I feel it only fitting. I know this story was written in 2002 and you have probably written plenty since then but if not, give this one another chance. You have the beginnings of a good storyline with so many possibilities. (6/10)
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