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    | Reviewer: 
    StrictMasterD
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Apr 10, 2012 |   
    |  | The concept of the Story is great, I assume English is not your Primary Language, it was very difficultto read thestory, notsure if words were mispelled or simply not menatto be in English but the difficuty in reading the story took away the enjoyment I had expect afer reding the synopsis Spell check in thiscase may NOT haveworked as iti s simply to hard to determine if it was bad English or not intendedto be in English (4/10)
 
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PROCO
  (Edit)  (Apr 10, 2012)To succeed in life you do not have to write the things right but you have to write the right things.Maria
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StrictMasterD
  (Edit)  (Apr 12, 2012)True but you have to write things so they are UNDERSTANDABLE |  |  |