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After the Mall
Author: Ellie
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(Added on May 18, 2002)
(This month 62224 readers) (Total 88636 readers) |
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It's been a long date with Rose and her friends ant the mall. But now it's time for something completely different. Did he dare? |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
somewriter
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May 11, 2007 |
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Very good story. I haven't read the first (yet) but I enjoyed it as its own piece. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
charlestudor
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Nov 11, 2006 |
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A great follow-up to "The Mall." The switch from F/m to M/m created a unique storyline and provided interesting and erotic reading. Very good work, Ellie. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Stefanie1391
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Oct 1, 2006 |
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I'm not into that crossdressing stuff, but I think your story is very well written and has the right pace. A few typos that can be ignored. I would' ve liked to have a bit more explanation to his background with Rose, though you leave enough hints. More good points: A BDSM story that actually uses safe words, that does not jump in to the extreme(ly unbelievable), that has a working story arc. Please continue writing! (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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intersting, i am not big at all into M/m stories but thiswas a good story (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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A very good story, and good continuation. As it has moved to M/m, it's a bit of transition from the first part, but still some good humiliation and great situations. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Top01
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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I look forward to reading more. (7/10)
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