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Humiliated in Alburquerque
Author: slave shoelicker
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(Added on Mar 31, 2012)
(This month 19669 readers) (Total 28845 readers) |
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An older man engaged to be married becomes captivated with a young woman while at a job training site. She makes him pay a price for his infatuation with her. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Apr 8, 2012 |
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I like this story... the words that sprang to mind were "short but sweet". There's not a lot in the way of character development or twists or turns... we learn a little of their relationship, and then suddenly she just turns around and pulls a humiliation angle on this guy out of the blue. But it works here... you learn just enough about these two to go along with what happens. I love that he has a fiancé, and you can see him telling himself that he isn't going to cheat on her with this young girl even though the reality is that he wants to, he just doesn't think he has much chance at somebody like her who is so young and beautiful. It makes his sudden surrender to her when she offers - demands! - his submission believable and engaging.
I'd have liked a bit more detail though, and I hope to see future instalments! (7/10)
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