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Paying back a Casino
Author: WhipMistress320
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(Added on Mar 31, 2012)
(This month 54227 readers) (Total 68579 readers) |
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A woman is tracked down to pay back the casino she owes a large amount of money to. She is given one chance to break even or end up owing more money. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
StrictMasterD
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Apr 3, 2012 |
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The synopsis got me to read the story, but as the other reviewer said, the story is way to short and lacks susbstance (4/10)
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Major Littmann
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Mar 31, 2012 |
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Too short, standard story rather badly written, the dialogie is stilted and far too cat on the mat allowing no build up of tension, other people have done this scenario so much better (4/10)
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