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My Ex's Plan
Author: WhipMistress320
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(Added on Mar 18, 2012)
(This month 11384 readers) (Total 23777 readers) |
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How my Ex came up with a plan to get me back forever. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 23, 2012 |
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Decent effort which could do with some further development. As is, "My Ex's Plan" is rather rushed -to put it mildly- and reads more like a chopped-down synopsys to be worked out at a later date.
The writing isn't bad. But it's not very good either. But I take in to account that every beginning is difficult and that one can get better through practice.
After all, Albert Einstein wasn't very good at Maths and Physics in school. See where that got him anyway...
And grinner should clean his reading glasses more often.
JJ (6/10)
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grinner666
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Mar 20, 2012 |
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Barely comprehensible. Poorly written, atrocious grammar, no character or story development, and a storyline that is puerile or even infantile. Pass on this one; not even good for a laugh. (2/10)
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