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Morning Call
Author: slavegirl1
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(Added on Mar 4, 2012)
(This month 10248 readers) (Total 15089 readers) |
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Young couple's morning endevours |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Aug 28, 2012 |
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Short stories probably most difficult
to be critiqued, because the author is
always leaving the reader wanting more,
and this author did an excellent job of
that! Nicely written, and a big thanks! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 11, 2012 |
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I agree with both the Major and tedrange, because, hey!, the story is indeed short.
But there's much more here than meets the eye.
I found "Morning Call" to be an almost perfect essai where slavegirl1 succeeds in painting a clear picture in a short scene -which is no small feat all in itself and would be screwed-up by less capable writers.
Usually, I don't review such short epistels, but this one has enough quality to go for a fat niner. And upping the score to more or less compensate for the below par rating of my predecessors.
I think I should stroll over to "Brittany" and see what else slavegirl1 had up her sleeve. if it's anything as good as this here short, It'll be a damn fine story...
Hope to read more from slavegirl1.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Mar 10, 2012 |
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Ok but there is too little of it (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
tedrange
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Mar 10, 2012 |
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Short and not much there. (4/10)
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