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The Other Woman
Author: Miss Irene Clearmont
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(Added on Feb 26, 2012)
(This month 19528 readers) (Total 34067 readers) |
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A wife's discovery of her husband's infidelity leads to a reordering of the domestic scene. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Apr 8, 2012 |
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One of the best stories I have ever read on this site.
I absolutely adore the way this dwells on the thoughts, the feelings and emotions. The wife comes across as a very dominant woman from the start - she's not into BDSM at all, and probably doesn't see herself as dominant, but the way she responds to the betrayal of her husband... some might curl into a ball and be tearful and sad, but she responds with passion and fury. You see the fire within her, and she doesn't hesitate to direct it straight at the husband.
He is a bit less well developed, but that's fine; this isn't really his story, it's hers.
I was a bit surprised by the turn the story took towards the end. I had expected to see the wife become dominant over her husband and Monique as a friend of the family, so to speak, but the author chose to go in a different and unexpected way. It seemed to me that it ran against the wife's character to go the way she did, and I found it a bit of a letdown to be honest. Still and all, that is not really a flaw in the story but rather just a choice by the author that just happened not to suit this particular reader! And it is reflected in the story codes, so I can't fault it on that front; hence the rating doesn't suffer at all, and this rates a full 10/10. Great stuff! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alix
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Feb 29, 2012 |
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Nice one. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Miss Irene Clearmont
(Edit) (Feb 29, 2012)
- Glad you liked it, it was fun to write. By all means E mail me if you want a PDF copy. Sort of easier to read!!!
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| Reviewer:
dilson
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Feb 27, 2012 |
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Well done. Nice effort. It's the first of yours I've read. I'll have to check out your other offerings. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Miss Irene Clearmont
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2012)
- Thanks for the high mark! Glad you liked it. The stories vary in theme and are a mix of F/m and F/f. My earliest were Denise and Diane, both of which are here as well as a few others...
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