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A Provocation Too Far
Author: Kaira Ina
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(Added on Feb 16, 2012)
(This month 19595 readers) (Total 34178 readers) |
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He's not her boyfriend; she has one of those, and other men besides. She likes to play rough, and she likes to tease - but she doesn't expect that one day, her teasing will provoke him a little too far, and she'll find out just how rough he likes to play. |
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| Reviewer:
phaetalistic
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Feb 23, 2012 |
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Wow. That was really hot and very well written. Your descriptions are excellent. I agree with DC David, the ring of truth and believability really sets this story apart from the rest of the "a young innocent is kidnapped and taken to the beyond incredibly wealthy Master/Mistress's house who has a ton of slaves and they are tortured/enslaved/what-have-you" (Not that there is anything wrong with those stories, I love 'em too. Just saying the realism is nice) So far, 10/10 - keep 'em coming. (pardon the pun) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
DC_David
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Feb 21, 2012 |
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Well written and that elusive ring of truth. (10/10)
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