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Stern Manor
Author: rbbral
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(Added on Feb 16, 2012)
(This month 58345 readers) (Total 87680 readers) |
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Mistress Stern and her three latex-clad female dominas have kidnapped eight prisoners and now in their basement they are undergoing unpleasant training in latex and body modifications paid for by their owners |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Hobbes
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Feb 20, 2012 |
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I will credit the author on their thorough editing. The spelling and grammar was excellent. There's nothing more distracting to me when I'm reading on this website, and the author's grammar and spelling is incredibly mediocre. The language and descriptions were excellent, and the characters were well defined.
That said, the content for me was quite disturbing. This is my first body modification story, and it does not mess around! There is some content that may offend unprepared readers, however if you are familiar and comfortable with body modification, this story will probably be great for you.
Finally, I commend the author on such a lengthy piece. I can't stand just snippets! While this story wasn't for me, I loved how long they made it, without it dragging or lacking any real direction. Well done. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
rbbral
(Edit) (Feb 20, 2012)
- Thank you for your comments, I always appreciate readers taking the effort to write their opinions - positive or negative. I do take my time over grammar and spelling, It puts me off reading a story that is poorly written, no matter how good the plot. I am sorry if you think some of the story was disturbing, compared with some stories on this site my feelings are that it is pretty tame, relatively speaking. Glad it didn't drag, I have stories a lot longer and should you read them, you may think otherwise. Again, thanks for your comments.
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