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Wanting innocence
Author: THEwriter
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(Added on Jan 19, 2012)
(This month 62641 readers) (Total 78933 readers) |
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A perverted man who wants more than the sluts he has now, wants more and will do anything to get it. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
himannv
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Jan 20, 2012 |
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Very disappointed by this on the whole. The main character is just going about looking for women to rape and sluts to fuck and thats about it. No buildup, no real story behind it and a rather boring concept when delivered so poorly. The writing wasn't bad but the story did nothing for me. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2012 |
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The perverted man is in reality a psychopath and a rapist. As such, the story holds no interest, because it all bogs down to one personality trait which is repeated over and over.
Writing was okay though.
JJ (4/10)
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