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mistress shruti
Author: sam boy
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(Added on Jan 8, 2012)
(This month 59366 readers) (Total 71175 readers) |
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beautiful cruel girl shows her lover how to treat slave |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2012 |
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Story starts off rather well, despite the awkward sentence structure.
But it seems that, as the story progresses, sam boy loses the pedals and starts going faster and faster until the last paragraphs are made of run-on sentences with a mumbo-jumbo that is akin to what a stone-cold drunk would pry out of a broken typewriter...
From strange to incomprehensible in under five minutes...
JJ (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
hlsquid
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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The author needs to either learn to spell and use grammar or find a new translator. (1/10)
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