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Be Careful What you Write...
Author: James Starling
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(Added on Jan 8, 2012)
(This month 53945 readers) (Total 70097 readers) |
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Sarah offers to help her writer friend solve a knotty problem and becomes bound up in events... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Chili Theas
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Sep 20, 2012 |
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Nicely done. Would love to see more. (8/10)
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sammy_808
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Jan 15, 2012 |
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i hope you write more stories in the future. i agree with the other reviewers, and hope we see these two again. (9/10)
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brace
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Jan 15, 2012 |
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I totally agree with Lisa. Well written! We want more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 12, 2012 |
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A fantastic & erotic tale. I'd love to read more about these two. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jan 10, 2012 |
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I really enjoyed this story and would have given it at least a nine bar for some poor editing. For example early on we have "Tashpullout a box from behind her desk". There were several other instances similar to this, hence my reating of an eight.
Having said that I do hope we read a lot more about these two delightful characters and the games they get upto. When will Sarah become a 24/7 slave/lover to her friend? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
scottishgent
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Jan 9, 2012 |
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Predictable but still fun to read (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
GawlerHicks
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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Very, very good :) I hope Tasha will prepare something very, very nasty for her friend, making Sarah have a lot of second thoughts. Keep it going! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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Nope, Lisa Jones doesn't stand alone. Bar my aversion for reflecting surfaces to reflect on one's self, I was thrilled by the style and flow of the story.
That's two craned necks and two gasping readers.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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I sincerely hope this hot little number is the opener for a series. I could stand alone but it would leave this reader gasping for more! (9/10)
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