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Mistress Dyvia's The Interview
Author: Mistress Dyvia
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(Added on Dec 31, 2011)
(This month 11784 readers) (Total 20244 readers) |
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We follow Chastity on her day of the big interview at a clandestine corporation where she has been under the instruction of Mistress Dyvia for the past ten weeks. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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Hated the presumptuous opening, but the story was very good. I agree in general with oldcuck's comments. (8/10)
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oldcuck56
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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Well written story with an unsuspected twist. Only a few typo's but apart from that I am looking forward to further chapters.
Well Done Mistress Dyvia (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Edcantor
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Jan 4, 2012 |
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It pushed all my buttons and added intrigue to erotica. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 1, 2012 |
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A bit of a lackluster affair with an "interview" which doesn't amount to much either.
Maybe I should first read Dyvia's other story, in any case, "The Interview" didn't make all that much sense to me through lack of background information.
Writing is okay, but the transcript needs a lot of improvement to become a story which holds enough interest to continue reading.
That pip below hands out a ten is, first of all, his perogative; and secondly, it should say more about the state of his smaller brain at the time of reading than about the quality of "The Interview".
JJ (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
pipsheeran
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Dec 31, 2011 |
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that was fantastic, i am a male slave and we should be treated like that i will put it in writing to my mistress, i have punished balls as instructed but not cum as i am in perminat chastity thank you so much mistress dyvia (10/10)
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