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The way
Author: zenoida
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(Added on Dec 27, 2011)
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in a cottage a woman wakes up to find her life is not what it used to be. She is forced to submit and learn the ways of two men who seem very odd. This is the story about her life there, and what she discovers about herself and her new world. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 28, 2011 |
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While I found "The Way" a well written, nice read, I still find there's too many things not right to start a happy-dance.
First and foremost because what happens here -and which happens a lot of the time-is that the author has a pre-conceived idea of where the "victim" is going to end-up, storywise.
As a result, a story often has a "victim" who isn't really a victim at all, but rather a pre-destined and soon to be raving masochist who's just waiting to be released by the author and as a consequence doesn't put up much of a fight, although she's been kidnapped and forced into sexual servitude.
The same goes for the concept of the "master" (hate that word). Kick a master in the nuts and he'll squeal like a falcetto pig; punch him in the nose and he'll probably bend over holding his face...
Women may be seen as the "weaker" half of our species, I know for fact that most of 'em are stronger than we males think and that they carry a punch if need be...
Anyway, a lot is of course the perogative of the author, so, let me move on and add that Zenoida has potential as a writer, one of which I'm looking forward to reading more from...
JJ
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
zenoida
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2011)
- Hi jj, and thanks a lot for you review. I have to agree, that I do have ideas of where it is going to end, and yes, it does have unrealistic gender roles, most def. It's a fantasy, and in my fantasies, men are strong and able. yep, it's true that in real life you're a sorry bunch, but hey, that's why the gods invented fiction. And about the victim, you are definitly not unright either.. same disclaimer, but also this is a story about someone finding themselves, not about a victim and a predator.. that's not my kink. What I really like is the play between a sub and a Master (love that word :P ).. and the ways it can liberate or bring out new aspects of people. It's only one facet, but I don't think it's an unimportant one.
But maybe some more from the perspective of the master would help, and I do plan on adding that.
I'm sorry I didn't get the happy dance. Maybe the sequel will help. I've taken the review to heart, at least, and thank you again
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2012)
- Help! It lives! ...and it uses sarcasm too o_O *grin*
There's loads of goils who clench their thighs when the word "master" is pronounced in a certain context, so, I understand where that is coming from. Personally, I prefer my name or "sir".
I also feel that your response shows there's lots more to you than "The Way" would -momentarily- let surmise.
Was going to check-up on the story anyway, but now I most certainly will, as I will on future eggs I'm sure you'll pond, pardon the expression.
Oh, and I've cast the furniture aside, just in case a happy dance is among the possibilities *wink*
JJ
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