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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
himannv
(Edit) |
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Dec 28, 2011 |
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Have to say I'm not a fan of stories that don't have much build up. While I think the writing was good and the dialogue was entertaining to follow, it really didn't do it for me due to the lack of background.
A few minor typing errors. A spell check does not do the whole job. Reread the stories before posting them and you may spot a few of the errors.
I expect there will be more to come. Highly recommended to those who like to get down to the action straight away, but not my cup of tea personally. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 27, 2011 |
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Much appreciated the start of "A Visit From Uncle", but Faith Fuller seems to pickup the pace as the story moves along -to the extent things are seriously rushed and come across as forced.
Of course, there's only a couple of paragraphs here and maybe Faith got carried away in her urge to paint a clear picture in as little space as possible, so, I'll wait til there's more -if indeed there's more to follow.
I'm sure Faith will surprise us in the future -when she takes her time to tell a tale- because the introduction we're being confronted with here shows lots of promise.
Well written with some very good, enticing dialogue, "A Visit From Uncle" already shows us a glimpse of the talent lurking.
Would have gone for a -temporary- seven, but upping a notch because of some of my buttons being treated overly nice.
I hope Faith becomes a regular.
JJ (8/10)
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