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Girls in Pearls
Author: torrid girl
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(Added on Dec 26, 2011)
(This month 13607 readers) (Total 20843 readers) |
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A day of slack is punished when he does not manage to get the garage cleaned out before she gets home. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 28, 2011 |
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Was a tad put off because of the start of "Girls In Pearls" and my inborn apprehention of male subs, but I continued because of the rather nice way the story is written.
To my delight and dismay, I saw torrid girl has pledged five stories before this one. Delight because, hey! she's good and I will have to have a go at girl's other stories.
Dismay for the same reason, actually, since I seem to have missed out on a very good writer.
"Girls In Pearls" is a refreshing little story in which we are confronted with "real" people moving about in a "real" world, thanks to the clever dialogue and train of thought of the protagonists.
Like I said, torrid girl is good. Very, even.
Read you around.
JJ
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Dec 27, 2011 |
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Nice story. Well written. Feels like it needs some more chapters. I liked the 2 main characters. (9/10)
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