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Punishment
Author: J Zhou
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(Added on Dec 26, 2011)
(This month 23959 readers) (Total 41854 readers) |
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relatively short story about how a master taught his slave a lesson |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Dec 27, 2011 |
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Too short but very well written, maybe Zhou could join several of these vignettes into longer tale. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 26, 2011 |
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"Relatively short" is a bit of an understatement, because there's only twenty-eight lines of text.
By what's there though, I am pretty sure J Zhou knows how to write; I just wish she/he would write a story instead of describing a snapshot of an event.
JJ (6/10)
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