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Dream Date with a Domme
Author: 781-524-112
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(Added on Nov 5, 2011)
(This month 66343 readers) (Total 89134 readers) |
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A bdsm curious guy takes a chance and is summoned to visit DOmme he has contacted for what he hopes will become his dream date |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cryan7
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Nov 25, 2011 |
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excellent work, easy to read, author has great imagination, looking forward to the next installment (9/10)
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jrnd711
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Nov 15, 2011 |
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Very hot read for anyone interested in this particular kind of scenario. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkracer
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Nov 9, 2011 |
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I really enjoyed this story. It had many of my favorite elements, including lots of cbt and forced chastity.
I think you could make it better switching to 3rd person, since a lot of stuff that happens is out of earshot of the narrator. Also past tense works better then present. Some great stuff! I want to know what happens to the poor guy next! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
781-524-112
(Edit) (Nov 17, 2011)
- Thanks for the review, I delberately chose first person and present tense to try and convey the sense of not knowing exactly what was going on. He is in the unknown and i wanted the reader to feel that emotion. More will be revealed in part Two which is ongoing. Hope you enjoy it
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