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Mindy's New Job
Author: slaveboyusa
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(Added on Oct 3, 2011)
(This month 16632 readers) (Total 31204 readers) |
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Meet Mindy, she just accepted a new position as a school counselor at a private school. However, someone has discovered her criminal past and is planning her downfall. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
carl_williams
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Mar 15, 2012 |
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good story - finished too quickly and also the girls name suddenly changed in the last paragraph (7/10)
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nqtv
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Nov 29, 2011 |
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pretty entertaining, looking forward to more of this or new ones. (8/10)
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dbenne2002
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Oct 10, 2011 |
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Author does not describe enough for the reader to see what is happening in their minds. Try and write a description a piece of fruit and then ask someone to read it and then tell you what you are describing. If you can do that, then you can get your message across. When Mindy was sitting at her desk, with the vibrator in her all day, did nothing happen? Didn't anyone come in and talk to her? Did her body not react at all?? Tell the reader what emotions she went through, how her body began to betray her and her physical emotions started changing. I think this this story line has potential. (5/10)
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