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Jack & Louise meet in the hotel room
Author: Lolly
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(Added on Sep 10, 2011)
(This month 13494 readers) (Total 31485 readers) |
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Jack has known Louise for several weeks and has been training her to see whether she can truly become his slut. |
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| Reviewer:
BendB4me
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Sep 19, 2011 |
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Excellent - Love the butt plug, but you need to add more details of her suffering, more of the pain as it expanded, Details of the stretching of her insides, the pain, the worry of it bursting her and the screams as she suffered. Love to hear more !! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Skittlz
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Sep 19, 2011 |
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I enjoyed the level it's on and it's written with fabulous detail (9/10)
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