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Tiffany Gets Decorated
Author: JustALittleRougher
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(Added on Jul 24, 2011)
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Tiffany has longed to be pierced and tattooed then turned into a sex slave, but it has to be non-consensual. David is glad to oblige. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 13, 2011 |
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Well written, the story suffers a bit from not having been written from a third person perspective.
Also, the "intrusion" of Kaitee screws-up the flow of the story; as if her actions were added in hindsight...
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2011)
- Sorry to hear - she turns out to be central to the story, maybe I was a little clumsy with the foreshadowing. Hope you like the direction it eventually takes.
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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Very nice start! I hope there's more to come! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- Thanks. Yes, a total of 9 - 3 trilogies. The second set is submitted and waiting to be posted, I'm polishing the 3rd set.
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| Reviewer:
feathersword
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Aug 14, 2011 |
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This is certainly a promising start, I look forward to what is to follow :) (9/10)
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JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- I hope you enjoyed Ch 2 and Ch 3, please let me know. I've submitted the 2nd trilogy and expect to see it posted soon.
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| Reviewer:
CoughDrop
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Aug 1, 2011 |
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Have to agree with Curtis - to a certain extent. The psychological build is a tool I greatly enjoy! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- Thanks. You posted this when Chapter 1 was up, I hope you enjoy Ch 2 and 3.
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| Reviewer:
Allan_D
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Jul 31, 2011 |
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Excellent beginning. Reminiscent of Jean de Berg's "The Image". I love the idea of psychological humiliation especially involving a subject who "half wants" it. I hope the author keeps it up and extends it for as long as possible and we don't have to wait too long for the next episode. (9/10)
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JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- I'm very flattered, that's an all-time favorite book of mine. I feel like the psychological tension is best in this first trilogy, the action becomes more central in the next set of stories.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 28, 2011 |
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More psychological than I remember you being. That seems to be a trend in the stories I've reviewed recently. (8/10)
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JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2011)
- Thanks, I'm shooting to move in the direction.
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| Reviewer:
dragonfly996
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Jul 27, 2011 |
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And they're still at the restaurant...the suspense is killing me... Love the story so far and can't wait for the next part(s)... Hope it's a long long story. Thanks (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- Thank, nice to know I kept the tension high this early, it's what I was shooting for. Regarding length, this is one of 9 chapters, I'm sending them up as 3 trilogies so watch for more "Tiffany" stories.
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| Reviewer:
jkim
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Jul 27, 2011 |
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nice start. a rather unusual mix of fantasies, but could be a winner. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2011)
- There is definitely a lot in this set of stories, and it goes farther in the 2nd trilogy. I'm hoping it doesn't lose the focus that it's all centered around her having her fantasy actually become real and the consequences of that.
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