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Amanda's Prize
Author: Amanda Johnston
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(Added on Jul 4, 2011)
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A pretty women seduces and enslaves an 18 year old co-worker. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nasferi
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Nov 23, 2011 |
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i liked it very much especially chapter 6 did not like the idea of involving other men must be because of my preferences (8/10)
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tyjord
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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Well done! Very enjoyable story. The flow and progression of Michael's development was handled well. If I had one very minor critique, it would be in the repetitive use of the same bondage positions. The author is obviously very creative, so why fall back on repeated descriptions of the same thing? As I said though, a minor quibble for an otherwise excellent story. Please continue! (9/10)
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kinkracer
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Nov 8, 2011 |
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Great story! Oh, how I wish I would have fallen into the clutches of such an evil tormentrix when I was 18! Very stimulating!
The writing is very good, but could use a little polish and one more edit to sharpen it up. (8/10)
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JerryH
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Nov 7, 2011 |
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Great story! I love the escalating degree of punishment and humiliation for the slave. Please keep writing! (9/10)
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wistan
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Sep 10, 2011 |
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I do love an older woman who "preys" on younger guys, and this is a pretty good example. Very nice, would like to see more! (9/10)
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hb60
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Jul 26, 2011 |
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Very arousing story!! Need to see how she posseses this young boy more as a slave..
(9/10)
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emodis
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Jul 13, 2011 |
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This is a pretty well written story but i think that it could be improved by being made a little longer with Amanda seducing michael into submission. (8/10)
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Eli
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Jul 12, 2011 |
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Great story. Wish there was more... glad to know there are women out there that have thoughts like this. Wish this would happen to me :) (9/10)
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