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Melvin
Author: Chuck.
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
(This month 51618 readers) (Total 53003 readers) |
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She would be perfect for him, quiet and shy as she was at work. He would kidnap her, keep her in the hidden room and once she saw she would be safe, he would remove the collar. They would fall in love, he was sure once she calmed down she would see that. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jpozed
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Jun 14, 2011 |
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deliciously cruel story, excellent stuff (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MarginallyTruePig
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Jun 12, 2011 |
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Good story, with a real nice surprise half-way. (8/10)
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