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Going under cover
Author: Submeat
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
(This month 36678 readers) (Total 49078 readers) |
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FDI sergeant Sally Warrel and her pal, agent David Radcliff, went undercover to infiltrate a sinister resort in Comptonville rumored to be running a slave trade |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Spankherhorny
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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I enjoyed this story immensely.
The entire brainwashing of Sally was amazing. The idea of a fake brainwashing is a conceptually interesting idea. Sally thought she could just pretend to submit, but its impossible to pretend all the way down to a fundamental level.
Along with being interesting, it was very arousing. I am slightly disappointed that there was not much spanking or discipline, but this story was focused on the thoughts of a slave, and that was done very well. I was very turned on as Sally became more and more submissive.
Over all great story, I look forward to the next chapter.
I can't wait to see what happens next with David and Sally. (9/10)
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