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Mafia Daughter
Author: antiphas
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
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Daughter of crime lord avenges the killing of her mother by a cop by kidnapping his daughter and turning her into her personal slave, then turning her vengence on him. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
worthlessfem
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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This is great, Antiphas. I can't wait for part two! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
teleya
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Why not a ten rating? After all the writing is terrific, the thought process is lucid and the story in general is feasible. So why not a 10? Because I couldn't identify with any of the characters. I neither felt a desire to own Amy - or to be dominated by Donna. (9/10)
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