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A dark night
Author: Scott Phillips
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
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Two guys break into a house and subject the female occupant to night she will not forget. |
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| Reviewer:
chicnerd
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Jul 1, 2011 |
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Awesome story with great kinky fun action. I concur about the paragraphing. (8/10)
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Shadoom
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Jun 20, 2011 |
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I like ton content; the writing, however, suffers from a lack of proper paragraphs, making it difficult to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Unreadable blocks of text. Every time a different character speaks there should be a paragraph break. Makes me wonder why the few breaks that are there… are there. Not worth my effort to wade through. (3/10)
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