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Frank's New Pet
Author: Darinost
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
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When Julie left Frank, he was a nobody. But when a chance encounter brings them together years later, he decides to show her how much he's changed. |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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the ultimate in debasement. what an evil mind you have lol (8/10)
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Master T
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Jun 18, 2011 |
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having an ex-wife who hated oral and never let me ass fuck her made this story even more enjoyable. job well done. I kind of wish i could do this to my ex. (9/10)
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Venom
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Good work indeed! I am surprised how it resembles one of my own stories, one of which I posted in the WRITERS' BLOCK here at this site's Forum. I know that yours is no rip-off, for both narrations were published at almost the same time. It is just quite interesting to observe such similarities.
Some lines I would like to point out:
"I gently turned the crank, careful not to hurt her." Well, he cannot help but hurt her if he suspends her on metal cuffs.
But a nice touch is the little excursion about the "fussy eater" which leads to the fellatio-part. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Darinost
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2011)
- It's true that the cuffs would be painful, but I would argue that they wouldn't begin to really hurt until a few minutes had passed. Frank's desire not to hurt her at that point wasn't about sparing her from injury or future pain, it was about not causing any sudden sharp pains that would wake her up. He wanted her properly trussed up first.
As for the "fussy eater" bit, that's actually a recurring theme throughout the entire story. Half the things Frank does to Julie involve making her taste awful stuff, plus getting her to beg for them and pretend she enjoys them. Little wonder then that by the time a year has passed, getting to eat a used napkin is a genuine reward for her.
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mike uk reader
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Jun 12, 2011 |
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Once again a well worked out story from this very talented author.
Warning it's a nasty tale of one mans ultimate sexual revenge on his former wife that is well documented indeed.
Although this author has two other great erotic stories within this site I hope there will be a few more from him in the near future. Top rating given. (10/10)
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Snark
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Jun 12, 2011 |
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I like it! Another stretch of the imagination into a nasty reality for an unsuspecting female. Nicely written and proofed, well edited and quite vicious. A few dozen more chapters would be even better...A mother/daughter reunion perhaps! Well done. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Darinost
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2011)
- Thanks! You're right that there was enough in the premise to generate a few more chapters, but I tend to err on the side of brevity. I'd rather hold back on ideas for use in other stories, where they can be given proper weight, than create a single massive story and risk not giving particularly fun scenes or images the attention they deserve.
The next two stories appearing here are also going to be extremely brutal (which is only natural, since all five are about introducing villains). One's got some physical torture, and the other, despite featuring little bondage or violence, is nasty enough that I'm still considering giving it a special disclaimer. I hope you'll enjoy them.
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