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Emma's Descent
Author: Bellatheslut
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 117621 readers) (Total 132272 readers) |
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Emma is dominated and controlled by two 13 year old boys. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
happi
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Feb 8, 2012 |
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great story you wanted some ideas for some more stories well haow about the boys take her to there
school and show her off to the other kids mr richmond takes her to some pub in the wrong side of town and is used by the customers keep up the good work !!! (9/10)
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DarkValentine69
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Oct 19, 2011 |
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Very naughty - excellent detail. Emma, if you're out there hmu - we'll carry this on in roleplay lol ;) (9/10)
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sarahbunnyuk
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Sep 2, 2011 |
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Well, I enjoyed it as I have a predilection for fantasies involving schoolboys and myself anyway! Looking forward to seeing what happens in future instalments, and if anyone has knowledge of other stories on this theme, please let me know! (8/10)
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ScooterX
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Jul 17, 2011 |
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It is a very well written story. I would have liked to have seen some story codes, as I don't normally read unlabeled stories, but I am not like some other jerks that read something in the dark and whine because they got surprised. Good story, please speed further chapters to us! ;-) (9/10)
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Templer2187
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Jul 11, 2011 |
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An excellent effort, Good Characterisation, I look forward to Emmas developing trials at the hands of her 'masters'. I perceive that 13 year old boys would have very few boundaries; I wonder how this might manifest itself in a situation like this. The older characters are an intersting and menacing change of pace from scene to scene. Thank you Bella. (8/10)
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non-writer
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Jul 4, 2011 |
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I enjoyed the original Emma stories and interested in seeing the direction Bellatheslut is taking this. (8/10)
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texswim
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Jun 28, 2011 |
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Love this type of humiliation story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Obviously I liked the story more than the previous reviewers, and more than most other stories posted recently. It is a little simple, but it's stroke material, and that doesn't require a soap opera plot or extensive backstory. This is something to jerk off to, and for those purposes it works very well.
I do agree about abhorring the lack of story codes. I was under the impression that they were mandatory, and certainly wish they were. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 7, 2011 |
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The one thing i really liked about this story is the nice large type face, which is a pleasent change for my poor old eyes. The pity is i was able to read the story ....... oh well you can not have everything in life.
i abhor stories where the author has been too lazy to put in the subject codes. i am not a fan of watersports and would not have read the story if i had known there were some in the story. So the bad rating from me is due to laziness of the author.
As teleya says what charisma have the thirteen year old boys got that makes a twenty year old female do everything they say? If they had any it did not come over in the writing. The really strange thing is though there is quite a bit written about Emma's humilation it just did not seem that she was truly humilated.
A little more reluctance on Emma's part and a stronger commanding voice from one or both boys would have made this story a tad more convincing. (5/10)
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dengiovani
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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I was reminded of emmaadmirer's story "Lisa got more than she asked for". The set-up is similar, submissive girl taken over by two teenage boys. I am enjoying this one so far and I look forward to seeing how bellatheslut develops the story. (6/10)
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teleya
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May 31, 2011 |
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Maybe if I was still an immature adolescent than I would have enjoyed this book. Overall it completely lacks maturity and sophistication. The author put Zero effort to explain what her attraction was in submitting to these two teen twits. Also Zero effort was made to describe the essence of the boys charisma. (i guess we cant blame the author too much on this point - since they clearly had no charisma) Also Zero effort by the author to write a tale that has any depth. Heck - forget depth. I would have settled for stale banalities.
So why a rating of five?
Probably because im putting zero effort in rating this horrible story (5/10)
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