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Why Did She Drink So Much
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Apr 29, 2002)
(This month 11338 readers) (Total 27025 readers) |
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She should never drink with common workman, not when Debbie is as desirable as she is, but what happens is for you to image. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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This reads kike a bunch of knit-together telephone calls. No story, almost no explanations, just dialogue.
It could have worked, but it doesn't sadly. Although the set-up has promise.
I'd redo the whole kaboodle and fill in the blanks.
Seems "your readers" were all on hollyday too, as I'm the first to rate and review the tale in almost seven years, and I'm not even one of them, "your readers" I mean.
JJ (6/10)
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