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Roman toy boy
Author: neverman
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 24544 readers) (Total 36675 readers) |
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A series about a young man in Rome in 75 AD and his suffering at the hands of rich and powerful women |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Sep 11, 2011 |
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A few formatting issues which detract from the story a bit, but otherwise a good story with lots of Femdom Fun! It would be nice to see a bit more variety in the characters though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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A couple of things - yes it made a salacious read, but it felt a little rushed. You could do with more paragraph breaks as the small font in large paragraphs is a little hard-going. It's a promising story.
One other thing - since you've taken the trouble to research things Roman, you've mentioned a German slave. Germany did not come into existence until hundreds of years later. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
teleya
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May 31, 2011 |
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Remember those awful Bruce Lee movies that were dubbed in english? This book shares that same abstract surreal feel.
Every single character in this book share a narrow single dimensional personality. (or no personality at all)
Spelling? Grammar? Plot development? Themes? Character development? The author considers such trivial literary skills as pass'e and beneath him.
Ironically, their lies the charm of this tale. If it becomes any worse - than this story may even reach the exalted level of being 'campy'! (7/10)
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