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Coffee and Dessert
Author: ToOwn1
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(Added on May 8, 2011)
(This month 70360 readers) (Total 83253 readers) |
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Part 1: You abuse her as pre-lactation pain sets in. Part 2: Dinner, coffee and Dessert |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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Delicious story: a nicely explained scenario that looks like it's building very well. Hope Part 4 is just as good. (8/10)
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SamCurious
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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intriguing. can't wait to see the update. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Laura.Dane
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May 15, 2011 |
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The setting and idea of the story is stronger than the execution. Thinking about the scene excites me, but the writing and emotionalism could be better. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
MarginallyTruePig
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May 9, 2011 |
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Part One is promising. Waiting for Part Two. (8/10)
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