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Slave of the Outcast
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Apr 20, 2011)
(This month 53817 readers) (Total 56156 readers) |
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A 17 year old boy returns back to his old hometown, after being taken away from the town by his parents seven years ago. When he returns, he will soon learn why his parents left that town. He also pays the price, as the past comes back to haunt him. The town gypsy, a girl he once bullied with the other kids, will at last get her revenge. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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May 6, 2011 |
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It's been a couple years since I have seen a story by this author. I assumed that time might have improved her skills. Sadly, I was wrong. This reads like something an 8 year old might write. It is choppy, at best, and near unreadable at worst. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
heed
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Apr 28, 2011 |
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It's great in terms of eroticy. It's just terribly depressing. I kept waiting for an emotional healing, where the two fall in love. Or at least some acceptance and happiness by the protagonist. So far though, it's just a very unhappy story. (6/10)
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xSoCalCynicx
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Apr 26, 2011 |
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Thanks for not properly tagging the story - nothing like an unexpected scat scene to ruin matters. Too much explanation of certain obvious points, such as "The Elvis". (4/10)
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slave4u304
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Apr 25, 2011 |
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Great story. Looking forward to additional chapters. (10/10)
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