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The Blacksmith
Author: Chuck.
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(Added on Apr 4, 2011)
(This month 55821 readers) (Total 59258 readers) |
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Idle curiosity in handcuffs brings long term bondage in chains. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
titsy [President]
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May 22, 2011 |
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It was pretty good. Hokey way to enter into the bondage, but once the suspension of disbelief over the premise is accepted, the story rolled well. Good ending. (9/10)
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Nemz
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Apr 15, 2011 |
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There are a few writing issues I'd love to see fixed. A couple of places where the story seems to be inconsistent, such as where John was determining his original prison sentence with Igor. I believe the beginning could have been a bit smoother as well, as his situation with his ex-wife seems to be told disjointedly.
However, the story itself is very intriguing. The idea behind the story itself is very creative and the characters within it have some interesting personalities and back stories. The lack of sex keeps the story more focused on the characters as well as their predicament, while giving you something to look forward to.
Congratulations on a pretty decent first story. (8/10)
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