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The Intruders
Author: Harry Kuntz
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(Added on Apr 24, 2002)
(This month 56429 readers) (Total 72750 readers) |
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A high school teacher who dares to flunk a couple of very tough students lives to regret it when he and his beautiful wife receive an unexpected visit from the two tough studs and a few of their friends. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 11, 2004 |
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everything about it was good, love this theme, this genere (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Nov 30, 2002 |
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I think this story is ok. I dislike the idea of the male tormentee always being, as jecanim so cleverly puts it, inadequate. Also, it's not like adequacy is all that matters in a person. Another thing, in the day, when I went to school, it was impossible to find out a teacher's address. The phone book never had it, and even when I wanted to send the wife of one of my teachers who was very sick a get well letter, the school wouldn't tell me their address, so I gave it to the teacher directly. In any case, in these stories, the teacher always seems easily findable. Also, the story codes were rather inaccurate, as there was some f/f action for a short period of time. As I said, it was ok, but it could definitely be improved. Also, the wife's sudden change was not well explained at all. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
jecanim
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May 21, 2002 |
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Iliked this story. It involved teen males, which is the stories I usually look for, and it involved the usually inadequate male, and the stunning wife, but I must say i found it too short. I think it could have gone on for a couple of more paragraphs. (8/10)
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