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Master John finds his slave Author: Master.John
(Added on Apr 2, 2011) (This month 11365 readers) (Total 12945 readers)
A wedding provides an opporyunity with a married mom

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Reviewer: Thon (Edit) Rating: Apr 6, 2011
An interesting start, but little more (the story only has 7kb of text when this review is written). It's well written and easy to read.
I would have like to read more about the woman and less of the mans dwelling on lost causes. Please paint an even more wibrant picture of her by using more details. Describe her dress & shoes more, colour of her lips and shape of her nose, etc. The story was not without these kinds of graphical elements, but I whant more. I'm here to read about the girls and the troubles they find themself in ;-)
(7/10)

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