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How I became Suzy the slut
Author: matt shaver
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(Added on Mar 16, 2011)
(This month 119504 readers) (Total 121557 readers) |
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male college student is selected to become a girl by his professor and his wife. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
badspyro
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Mar 18, 2011 |
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Lacks detail, coherent storyline, grammatical structure and feeling.
Characters need to be built up, rather than "he was a bad looser", events could be played out more and more description would help create the mental image that the author has in their mind - is the cock veined and pulsing, throbbing with desire, or is it a hard yet stubby little sissy clitty, not even worth the time that would be spent jacking it off?
What about the transition? What about the slut he was to become? The change? This just seems to be a brief encounter jackoff story with no jackoff sections except for in the author's own mind. (2/10)
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