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Discipline Maintained
Author: pamela
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(Added on Mar 16, 2011)
(This month 76963 readers) (Total 84277 readers) |
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"Would you like to watch me chastise her, John?" said the English ambassador...speaking of his wife. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Oct 13, 2011 |
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One of those stories where we could use a Spinal Tapian knob which can crank the score all the way up to eleven... well done, pamela!
JJ (10/10)
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saxman66
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Apr 5, 2011 |
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Brutal story, well written. As an optimist I would have preferred if John had had the honour to break his word and break the ambassador, either for his financial corruption or his slavery activities. The women are a bit weak but no impossibly so if they come from a back-ward society or have suffered long term abuse. (8/10)
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rks
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Apr 4, 2011 |
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The best of the latest lot of stories - another very high rating story from Pamela.
Unusual way to work in the second woman, but no scope for complaining about the flogging. The flogging is very severe, particularly when Samantha is flogged on her breasts. The deal struck by Samantha seems right out of V.P.Viddler. Perhaps a little more degradation would have been nice. The new attraction in this story being the branding of Dolores' breast, and its manipulation during the subsequent fucking. (10/10)
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ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Mar 29, 2011 |
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after reading this story, i am more convinced that the author cannot possibly be a genetically straight woman. most likely a man pretending to be a woman, or--a lesbian woman with a vestigial penis. Because the male characters all share such fine and complex descriptions. Those men are SO ALIVE, so 3D, and so complex, with passion, lust, guilt, confidence, diffidence, power, weakness. They are SO FUCKING REAL!! Whereas the women depicted in all her/his/its stories are merely bags of meat with different eye colors and different ways to be tortured, not that it's bad; its perfect. It's just that I cannot believe its written by a woman. Are you a woman, Pamela? I will be hit with a tomahawk missile in Tripoli before I believe you are a woman. If you are really a woman, are you extremely hideous and crazy as fuck in real life?
And HOLY FUCK, you might call this the porn Charles Dickens could have wrote, or maybe A. E. Housman like his what you call it, "Der Sandman" (?) (10/10)
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doctavian
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Mar 27, 2011 |
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If you want me to read a story, all that you have to say is "written by Pamela." "Discipline Maintained" is the heart warming story of the metamorphosis of a sexually naive man, one who is even unaware of his own sexual proclivities, into the self assured, sexually fulfilled sadist that he was always destined to be. At the end of the story, as Charles stands at the ship's rail with his most recent purchase, bound and resigned to her fate (of a lifetime of emotional and sexual abuse) obediently standing at his side, we know that something beautiful has happened and that all is right with the world. Well done...Well done indeed! (10/10)
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sedmwif
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Mar 21, 2011 |
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This story, like all her previous stories, does not disappoint. Easily her best story yet published (not an easy task, there are all excellent!). (10/10)
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drayman
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Mar 20, 2011 |
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An excellent tale. I thoroughly enjoyed the way the author constructed the story and propose searching for more of her contributions. (9/10)
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Arkane
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Mar 19, 2011 |
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Superb erotic tale (10/10)
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Snark
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Mar 19, 2011 |
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Well done! Another well written tale of internal conflict and decisions made with the smaller head! Superb editing and proofreading (as always) and a twist at the end we come to anticipate from the talent author. (9/10)
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roybme
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Mar 18, 2011 |
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A very nice story, and exceptionally well written as we've come to expect in a pamela tale. This is quite different than most of her stories both in voice and character, but still every bit as exciting. It is both believable and intensely erotic. Thanks once again pamela for an excellent read! (10/10)
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Ashley Zacharias
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Mar 18, 2011 |
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Bravo. A superb depiction of the psychological forces that might drag a man down into a state of evil. I have read a number of your other stories and have enjoyed your writing greatly. This story, though exceeds the high bar that you set with your previous writing. (10/10)
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