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Anniversary Assignment: Riding The Horse
Author: Michael Alexander
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(Added on Mar 6, 2011)
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Required to complete her anniversary assignments, Breanne submits to an extended ride on a wooden horse, coupled with "breaks" that are almost as bad as riding the fiendish device in the first place. |
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bracemaiden
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Apr 2, 2011 |
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Very creative and well written. The willingness of people to call a stop, and the consensuality of the intense pain were good aspects.
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MarginallyTruePig
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Mar 27, 2011 |
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Nice story, somewhat realistic. Notable for having the male sub not being a sissy, and for the feelings between the three characters.
I didn't like the advertisement for the external website, it was a bit too obnoxious to my taste. (8/10)
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Michael247
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Mar 14, 2011 |
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You'd think after having 9000 plus people read this and follow the link to my blog and website, driving traffic through the roof and spiking my numbers dramatically, that SOMEONE would give poor Breanne at least a TINY remark, even if it was nothing more than "hey, that was pretty good." Well I edited the damn thing, and it was "pretty good". So here is her bloody 10.
Update * I felt I needed to express that this commentary was presented with a facetious and slightly irritable flavor. I was channeling both Bitter Betty and certain commentators. It was said with a laugh and wink. If I offended anyone, please accept my apologies.
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Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander (10/10)
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tjlewis132
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Mar 13, 2011 |
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Gee, let's see. Rating your own story (It is submitted under Michael Alexander) Giving out what I believe is only your third '10' in nearly a hundred reviews, then of course promoting your fledging web site, even bragging about the traffic you draw, come on. Hell, I'm as amateur as they come with my unorthodox stories I post and quite honestly put you to shame with drawing readers. Remember the scolding you gave 'Bitter Betty' a while back who complained about not getting any responses from reviewers? Maybe you should take a look in the mirror, the same applies. Besides, even in your own words, it was just 'pretty good' and 'good' is a '7' by the rating system, not a '10'... By the way, no bragging on this end, just fact, and I don't try to make a dime with my stories and promote other sites either. Just sayin'... J LEWIS (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Michael247
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2011)
- Malicious commentary is neither appreciated nor warranted. Thank you for your time.
- Replied by:
tjlewis132
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2011)
- To Micheal/247 response to my review... Malicious commentary? What was malicious, the fact I pointed out you seem to use this forum to promote your site? Maybe you can explain to me where I erred. Maybe about your review of 'Bitter Betty'? Maybe where you gave yourself a '10' for a story you submitted? Maybe where my amateur renderings outdraw your 'professional' offerings? Oh, I see where you offered somewhat of an appology under your review, then again, kept your '10', that'a boy! I don't see the maliciousness, just the honesty. And, what's that saying... If you can't stand the heat, get out of the kitchen? With that all said, thank you for your time!... J LEWIS
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