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Sarah Naked In School
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Feb 20, 2011)
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After "Sarah And the Punishment Station", Sarah is sent to a high school as part of an experiment in public nudity and submission. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
violetgem
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Jul 26, 2012 |
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loved all the humiliation. Good read :) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2012)
- Thank you for the high vote! I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll read some of the rest of the "Sarah" series and enjoy them as well!
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glib24
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May 1, 2012 |
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Very enjoyable. I like stories with happy endings. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (May 1, 2012)
- Thank you for the kind words! My apologies for the strange squares that appear in the dialogue instead of quotes - the result of a change in word processing software I'm afraid. I've written sequels (along with a longer version of the story) that I hope you'll enjoy just as much. Book Two adds a bit of action and adventure.
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| Reviewer:
Svetlana
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Apr 22, 2011 |
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I liked this story very mch. its been one of the best i have read in a long time , and i wish to thank you to write such a well written story, where the persons come to life instead of staying a one-dimensional person.
I hope you keep writing in this style, and that many folks can enjoy your writing style. keep it up please this kind of stories ;) (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 12, 2011 |
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i am in a real quandary. i have read the longer re-write of this story, and there are some things i like more about this story and vice versa.
This is a well written story but i agree with Curtis the ending is discordant. Unlike Curtis i do like the police demonstration scene and feel that it should be kept.
Thank you dear author for a fine story and an enjoyable read. (8/10)
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mechgogo
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Feb 27, 2011 |
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I have to admit, I felt a certain amount of revulsion over the concept behind this story and its predecessor. But, as in the case of the first one, I kept getting pulled back in. The characters are well done, with believeable reactions and behaviors, the world is well-developed (not one I'd agree to live in at gunpoint but well developed) and there's a strong sense of eroticism in the story. It's a good read and I recomend it highly. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 26, 2011 |
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Until near the end I was planning to give this a '9', but the last few passages — the 'what came after' — are very discordant and don't seem to mesh with the rest. I realize you aren't going to do it, but my vote would be to scrub the police demonstration and subsequent, then add another couple of days in school. Of course, that's not the story you wanted to tell.…
'Naked in School' is a genre, and for the most part this is an improvement on the genre.
EDIT: By the way, I like the general style in which this story was told. I ended with the feeling that I had learned something, and I like that. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Feb 26, 2011)
- Thanks for the honest review, Curtis! I wasn't sure about the police demonstration myself; seemed too out of character but I needed something dramatic to happen. I may go back and re-write the ending if others have the same complaint. What are your thoughts about the boys' filming project?
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Curtis
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2011)
- Sorry, I'm not getting notifications when someone replies to my reviews, so sometimes a month or more goes by before I realize it,
To answer your question, I rather enjoyed the boys' film project. Without going back to re-read the entire story I don't quite remember, but my impression was that we never saw the result of Sarah's modifications to the apparatus the boys were constructing in shop class, just the foreshadowing of it.
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