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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Feb 9, 2011 |
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The idea is a good one, the writing is nice, the telling is well done (alas a tad on the short side) and the atmosphere created breathes a certain restrained eroticism.
Only slight negative is the grammar and omitted words, here and there.
Very well done, recommendable effort, to the point it makes me curious about kiryous' next story.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
(Edit) |
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Jan 30, 2011 |
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A lovely story, beautifully written. Thank you. (9/10)
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