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Cumpires
Author: ElementsOfLife
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(Added on Jan 27, 2011)
(This month 41511 readers) (Total 59613 readers) |
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Follow Melanie as she finds new heights of pleasure gets used to the new life she's been given. This story will start off light and will grow more extreme as Melanie grows into her new life. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bipsfan
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Sep 28, 2012 |
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It is an excellent story .. so so loved it .. This has a potential of becoming a series ... Please continue ... please please (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 11, 2012 |
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Very interesting & very good! I enjoyed the style & switch on vampires. I look forward to the next chapter to see where this story goes. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 6, 2012 |
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Nice take on Vlad Tepes' offspring. The detail in the story and musings/conversations make "Cumpires" stand out; make it even sounding realistic.
Seems also that ElementsOfLife's writing has positively progressed, which is always nice to see.
Well done.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ThFH
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Apr 29, 2011 |
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I like the main setup of the story. I wonder what you will do with melanie will she become somekind of slave or a bit more dominant. I am looking forward to your next stories. (9/10)
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