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Donna's Transformation
Author: JustALittleRougher
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(Added on Jan 25, 2011)
(This month 67218 readers) (Total 103349 readers) |
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Donna has enjoyed using her body to climb the corporate ladder. Now it's payback time. She's blackmailed by a man who is going to completely de-feminize her, turning her into a gay/lesbian/drag queen sex toy. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Deathnote
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Feb 23, 2011 |
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I have to agree with JimmyJump on this. It's nicely written and I can tell that a lot of effort was put into this, but I also didn't like the direction it's was going. I guess I was hoping for some girl-on-girl action before the transformation went as far as it did. Ah well, just my personal taste, really. Neways, good job. It's well written, but not really my thing. ^_^ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 9, 2011 |
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Very well written with great character build and storyline, "Donna's Transformation" is probably JustALittleRougher's best work to date.
No holes in the plot, no awkward transitions, no stilted dialogue, but rather well fleshed-out three dimensional people living inside their own plausible reality.
At the same time, "Donna's Transformation" is a story which I don't like. Scrap that. I do like the story, just not where the plot is taking it.
But that's me and my personal taste again. I absolutely won't hold it against the author. Certainly not when he keeps coming up with stories written as tight and with as much imagination as "Donna's Transformation"...
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Feb 9, 2011)
- Thanks. always appreciate it.
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| Reviewer:
HardBur
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Jan 31, 2011 |
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Good - continue on. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2011)
- Thanks all for the notes. I promise - more coming.
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rebecca[slave]
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Jan 29, 2011 |
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Wonderful, please please please add more. (10/10)
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TOXIS
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Jan 28, 2011 |
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Love the premise and the tight writing. I admire how relentlessly things move forward. This is one of those few stories - Zippers by Anita Parker and Cutty by Bokkey come to mind - that have legs. It deserves a very strong and dark finish. Happy to proofread any time. (10/10)
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Snark
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Jan 28, 2011 |
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From one sick fuck to another...well done! Enjoyable, twisted, perverted. Okay, I liked it. A bit more proof reading would help, but good editors and proof readers cost money we don't want to spend. Write on, McDuff! We perverts need the distraction! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
JustALittleRougher
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2011)
- Thanks. Working hard at it.
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rocket71
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Jan 28, 2011 |
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Good story, And I'd like to see more. I'd like to see how he's going make her only have rear sex,especialiy with her husband. (9/10)
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